Overall some feedback, Some scenarios can be worked on, some answers are quite short and don't explain much, overall you are a pretty fine person, the Application is okay,
You have only named 1 instead of 3.
You also have some grammar errors, you may want to check on some of that a program like grammarly can be a big help, you have grammar errors in most of the questions, may want to view over that, and present the application to the best of your ability.
You may want to expand a little on this as it is a little confusing : I would rp that grievous had been ordered to retreat by Count Dooku and had crashed a muni into the republic fleet to escape and blow up a venator using the ship destructor tool.
It seems to be out of the blue, maybe want to shape it and explain it a little better.
With this question this is what most EMs say? is there anyway it would be more creative, rather than cater to all regiments needs. Overall I will be giving a weak neutral on the basis of it seems rushed at some stages, the only stage I believe is heavily touched on is the Document which seems to have taken longer, while the application its self is filled with errors and some confusing answers, hopefully you can expand and work on this as I feel you can have what it needs although this document isn't greatly produced/executed and could of been created in maybe 30-50 minutes, take some time and refine this application, hopefully you can take this feedback onboard.