Hey rat, your event design document is very plain and unoriginal the event briefing is short but not concise enough to justify it. you talk about a super weapon that may be used but i never see it explained or used, this to me looks like 12am mini event. things i would recommend for event planning for the future is inspiration, if you watch a movie and you like a idea from a scene you could develop and work around that idea until you start to laying out the ground work for your event. Also your events need more information displayed, your sub title during the event barely displays enough information, combat, actions, story development and most importantly some flavour and originality. Dont get me wrong you are active on the server just need to work on some stuff.